You clicked because prospects keep picking the cheaper option. Here's the fix.
Why most VSL scripts quietly lose money
You can get a script from anywhere. A freelancer, a template, a prompt. They'll all hand you something clean and structured that hits the right beats. And it'll sit there on camera doing nothing, because it's talking to a customer you invented instead of the one you have.
The gap is language. Your buyer carries specific fears, specific objections, and a specific way of describing the problem inside their own head. Guess at it and your script feels close but never clicks. Nail it and they feel read, and a prospect who feels read walks into the call already sold.
So before I write a word, I go find your actual buyer. I read the reviews they leave on your competitors, the forums where they vent, the questions they ask when nobody is pitching them. That's the Eavesdrop Draft, and it's the whole difference between a script that sounds good and one that books calls.
"The research he did on my brand is what separates him from the pack."
A script from a prompt vs. a script from research
A script from a prompt
- Written from your assumptions about your customer
- Sounds like every other VSL in the feed
- Generic objections, template structure
- Decent. And decent doesn't sell.
A script from research
- Written from your buyers' actual words
- Built on the Eavesdrop Draft: I read the forums they post in, the reviews they leave on your competitors, the complaints they make when no one is selling to them
- Aimed at their real objections, structured to pre-qualify buyers before they book a call
- Yours, and only yours
How it works
Buy the script
$197 flat. No retainers, no calls required, refunded if you hate it.
The questionnaire
Fill out my deep questionnaire about your offer and your customers. Takes about 20 minutes, and it's the foundation of everything.
The Eavesdrop Draft
I treat your answers as a starting theory, then go verify who your customer really is and collect their exact language.
Delivered in 23 hours
Your complete script is delivered within 23 hours, ready to film, with the word count printed at the top.
What you get
- A complete, full-length VSL script written in your buyer's language
- Structured to pre-qualify prospects and handle objections before the call
- Ready to read on camera, no editing required on your end
- Unlimited revisions. If any line is off, tell me and I rewrite it until it's right.
But can't I just prompt this myself?
You can, and it'll look right. Here's where it falls down: a prompt only works with what you already believe about your customer, and you're standing too far inside your own business to hear how they actually talk. The research is the difference. On this version I run the deep pass myself — reviews, forums, competitor complaints, read by hand, with a judgment call on every line — and I keep revising until it's right. The listening is where the money hides.
The whole guarantee, in one sentence.
If you get your script and feel like you got got, message me or email me and I'll refund you. No questions asked.
Every week your VSL stays generic is a week of calls that never got booked.
Hate it? Message me, refunded, no questions.Full transparency: after your script is delivered and you're happy with it, you'll see one short video offering to have me shoot it professionally. That's the entire funnel. No email sequences, no pressure. You buy the script, you get the script.